Friday, 31 May 2013

The Pirate Mermaid (beta demo) - Feedback/review

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Ever since your father died searching for the mermaid's treasure, you've sworn to fulfil his dream yourself. Becoming a pirate was the best way of accomplishing that goal... until your mutinous crew dumped you overboard during the biggest storm of the century.
Miraculously, you are saved and find a sorcerer who will make you a magical contract – with a catch. He'll transform you into a mermaid so you can grab the treasure, if you bring him a red vial from the mermaid treasury. If you fail, you'll be turned into a lobster for his dinner.
Now, you have six days before the spell ends. Will you become rich beyond your wildest dreams? Fail the contract and become lobster bisque? Perhaps you'll fall in love with the mermaid prince or sorcerer...
Or corrupt them into joining your evil pirate ways.

First glance
As with any visual novel the first thing you see is, of course - the main menu. The drawing was very nicely presented, colourful and got me in the mood to really sit down and get right into it.
Following that was a short written intro and if I'm honest, anything like that I usually just glance over, but not with this one. The first few sentences were enough to reel me in, grab my attention and hold it firmly on what was in front of me. The story for me had it all, it told a beautiful tale of what was going on and stirred several feelings in me, such at sadness, anticipation and excitement. So in short just from that 2 minutes or so, I was already hooked. Beautifully done guys!
Sadly right after this I was called to eat and not wanting to waste a moment I ravaged my food like a starved dog and dived right bac to my computer.


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I guess a lot of people might not like the thought of a female pirate because of the myths about them and whatnot, but at the end of the day this is a fantasy novel and I personally don't see anything wrong with it – In fact, I took an instant liking to the MC. I found her to be funny, cheeky yet confident, somewhat clumsy but it was really endearing and all round cute. I would even go as far as to say that I'd really love to cosplay her but I'm sure a lot of people wouldn't understand what I was trying to be haha.


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The sorcerer I also took quite a liking too. I can't quite put my finger on why I like him though – I just do :3 Maybe it has something to do with the monocle, I don't usually see cute guys sporting one of them very often and actually pulling it off as well as him. Other than that, the little that is shown of him, he does have quite a strong personality. If you can't tell already, I've defiantly picked the one I want to romance first right here ^-^


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Mikali... Something seems off about him to me – not the way he's written I mean as in he just seems too innocent to me; as if he's hiding something and I really want to find out what! I found his occasional blushing to be adorable/sweet and although he didn't stand out as much as the sorcerer I do look forward to getting a better understanding of him when the full game is released.


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Jack the 'merbird' parrot I just LOVED all over. He's trouble and the MC would have it so much easier if she just ditch him somewhere but he's what brings most of the comedy to the game. I found myself smirking whenever he popped onto the screen and I'm sure the game wouldn't have as much life without him. 


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Ignoring the minor typo here and there (as it's still in it's beta stage) I thought everything was described nicely. It has a lot of detail and was easy to follow. Not once did I have to re-read anything to get a clear grasp on what was happening.
The GC, backgrounds etc were stunning, my only complaint here is that I didn't get to see enough :( Obviously when the full game is available I wont have that problem haha
The only thing I did find a tad annoying was some of the sound effect but by the time I'd finished half the demo I wasn't noticing them as often. Not sure if that is a good thing or not but... yeah.

Overall I loved what I've see from this visual novel so far and I can truthfully say without hesitation that I can't wait to get my hands on the full version!

Anyone who managed to get through all that fangirl rambling I appreciate it! Either way you can get your hands on a copy of the demo here  and don't forget, if you do play it leave some feedback at the main site!!

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